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Random thoughts on our impending doom and everyday life, courtesy of a Romance Writer who occasionally feels the need to talk like a Sailor.

Friday 29 March 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors... Untitled Rock Star MS



Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warriors. Today I’ve got another eight sentences from my 1st July release, a New Adult, first person point of view, rock star book. Because rock stars need true love and a happy ever after rising from unlikely circumstances too, bless them. 

Here’s the link to the first eight that I posted way back, just in case you’re needing the full picture. But safe to say, our courageous young heroine has woken up to some interesting circumstances in Las Vegas. That, and the hangover from hell.






     Bad things happened here, terrible things. I just wanted to crawl into a ball and die. Sweet baby, Jesus, what had I been thinking to drink so much?
     “You okay?” a voice asked, male, deep, and nice. Really nice. A shiver went through me despite my pain. My poor broken body stirred in the strangest of places.
     “Are you going to be sick again?” he asked.




10 comments:

  1. A very realistic snippet, which everyone can relate to. Hangovers suck and I can't count how many times I've been in her position. You capture her feelings in the moment well.

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  2. Poor girl. Great setup. July seems so very far away...

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  3. I'm with Eleri, can't wait to read this. Lots of interesting possibilities presented in today's excerpt - well done!

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  4. At least he didn't run off as soon as he saw her in that state! Honest snippet.

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  5. Loved the last line, LOL. I feel sorry for her and hope he doesn't end up running off if she does get sick again.

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  6. Well I've heard what happens in Vegas stays there. I would hope the good things can follow you home though.

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  7. LOL. Sick in front of a sexy guy. Terrible for her.

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  8. I've been there... sick over the toilet I mean, not in Vegas with a strange man :-) I could feel her pain.

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  9. Fantastic snippet. Poor thing. Love his question :-)

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