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Random thoughts on our impending doom and everyday life, courtesy of a Romance Writer who occasionally feels the need to talk like a Sailor.

Sunday 20 May 2012

Six Sentence Sunday...

Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. There was a lot of concern regarding the one sided kiss last week so I thought we'd continue with that. See if we can't find out why Natalie isn't getting with the program already and kissing the poor boy senseless. This is, afterall, a romance. Silly heroine. I swear... characters can be so difficult sometimes.

Now this one comes with a language warning so if the F-Bomb offends then I wish you a lovely day and on your way. To everyone else, thank you very much for dropping by! Big gushy appreciation to everyone who leaves a comment, I love hearing from you each week.


     Angus opened his eyes to find hers were huge, shocked. Oh, no, had he read her wrong? His dick was killing him, fucking with his head, maybe she hadn’t meant what he’d thought she’d meant. “Is this okay?”
     “You want...” Her lips grazed his as she spoke because he wasn’t moving back, not until she said to. 


10 comments:

  1. Is Angus waiting for her to call all the shots? I have a feeling he'll get more assertive as the night closes in. Good six!

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  2. Seems like she knows what he wants - so what's she playing at?

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  3. Interesting six....hope you follow it up next week where you left off :)

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  4. Weeeell, she's not pulling away so I guess... :-P

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  5. I love that he isn't moving back! Hmmm... I wonder why she is shocked.

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  6. This is very edgy with borderline consent issues. I hope they can sort it out between them - but maybe not too soon. If protagonists communicated effectively it would ruin a lot of good stories. :)

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  7. Oh, you leave us hanging again!!! What does she say/do next? Can't wait for next week.... great description of his reaction to her non-response

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  8. Love the tension here. I definitely want to know what happens next!

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  9. I love how he won't do anything without making sure it's her express desire. What a melty-warm hero!
    Great six :D

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