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Random thoughts on our impending doom and everyday life, courtesy of a Romance Writer who occasionally feels the need to talk like a Sailor.

Sunday 18 November 2012

Six Sentence Sunday...

WARNING: Rude sweary language happens in today's excerpt. You have been warned.


Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. I tried my hand at writing an Erotic Romance/Comedy at my husband's behest. No, not one single gory, gooey zombie makes an appearance. Sad, isn’t it? Basically, it’s Cinderella if she’d left her bra behind instead of a glass slipper. And if Cinderella was a modern day plus-size pin-up girl on a mission to get her life in order. Its novella length and I’m polishing it up for submission. Let me know what you think.



The sun was shining and birds were singing. And maybe, just maybe, if Alex pressed his face hard enough into the pillow, he’d be able to suffocate himself and put an end to the pounding inside his head. It was worth a try.
     Such a pity, because the rest of him felt fan-fucking-tastic, oddly enough. But sweet merciful mother did his brain hurt. It easily drowned out all the bliss and happy emanating from the neck down.



13 comments:

  1. I can identify...lol. It sounds great so far :)

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  2. I'm smiling already Kylie. Sounds like its going to be fun & fab.

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  3. Ah, the price we have to pay for wonderful memories. :)

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  4. Sorry he has such a headache but the description made me smile - really a fun six (hope he takes some aspirin tho LOL)!

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  5. Fun 6! Sounds like he had a night of carousing and sexing!

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  6. As much as I love your zombies, I think you'll do great with erotic romance/comedy!

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  7. Great six - made me smile! :) Love the contrasts!

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  8. Great 6 - The whole premise sounds great, but I love the way you've described how he feels.

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  9. I love it! You asked what we think and that's what I think :-) Your take in his POV is fabulous.

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