Welcome
to another Weekend Writing Warriors. Today I’ve got another eight sentences from my 1st
July release, a New Adult, first person point of view, rock star book. Because
rock stars need true love and a happy ever after rising from unlikely circumstances too, bless them.
Here’s the link to the
first eight that I posted way back, just in case you’re needing the full picture.
But safe to say, our courageous young heroine has woken up to some interesting circumstances in Las Vegas. That, and the hangover from hell.
Bad
things happened here, terrible things. I just wanted to crawl into a ball and
die. Sweet baby, Jesus, what had I been thinking to drink so much?
“You
okay?” a voice asked, male, deep, and nice. Really
nice. A shiver went through me despite my pain. My poor broken body stirred in
the strangest of places.
“Are
you going to be sick again?” he asked.
A very realistic snippet, which everyone can relate to. Hangovers suck and I can't count how many times I've been in her position. You capture her feelings in the moment well.
ReplyDeletePoor girl. Great setup. July seems so very far away...
ReplyDeleteI'm with Eleri, can't wait to read this. Lots of interesting possibilities presented in today's excerpt - well done!
ReplyDeleteAt least he didn't run off as soon as he saw her in that state! Honest snippet.
ReplyDeleteLoved the last line, LOL. I feel sorry for her and hope he doesn't end up running off if she does get sick again.
ReplyDeleteWell I've heard what happens in Vegas stays there. I would hope the good things can follow you home though.
ReplyDeleteLOL. Sick in front of a sexy guy. Terrible for her.
ReplyDeleteI've been there... sick over the toilet I mean, not in Vegas with a strange man :-) I could feel her pain.
ReplyDeleteFantastic snippet. Poor thing. Love his question :-)
ReplyDeleteHow embarrassing for her!
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