Random thoughts on our impending doom and everyday life, courtesy of a Romance Writer who occasionally feels the need to talk like a Sailor.

Sunday, 7 April 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors... Untitled Rock Star MS

Welcome to another Weekend Writing Warriors. Continuing straight on from my heroine’s precarious head in the toilet with hangover from hell in Las Vegas scenario from last week. Can you see where this is going? I bet you can.

Apologies for not being around to comment last week due to the deadline for this MS crushing my soul and my laptop getting smashed. Don't ask, it wasn't pretty. Looking forward to visiting your blogs and commenting this week. Here's the link to last week's if you'd like to catch up.

I have no idea how this picture relates. Sparkly things from the night before, perhaps?

     I sat up and pushed my greasy blonde hair out of my eyes. His blurry face loomed closer. Quick smart, I slapped a hand over my mouth because my breath had to be hideous.
     “Hi,” I mumbled.
     My dry eyes acclimatized and slowly he swam into focus. The boy was built and beautiful and strangely familiar. But I’d never met anyone like him. Impossible.


  1. Intriguing eight, l'm wondering all kinds of things so that has to be good! Love the descriptions.

  2. The hand ovals er the mouth is priceless. Nice excerpt.

  3. Er, I meant the hand over the mouth.

  4. Nice--the hand over mouth. Nice description of the boy ;-)

  5. This really makes me want to know more. Tweeted.

  6. Ooh, the possibilities here! Terrific snippet and I hope your coming week will be much more hassle free!

  7. The day after is never pretty. Great description

  8. Love the hand coming to her mouth. It's a real and honest moment. I'm very curious about those last couple lines. Intriguing.

  9. Oh, poor girl! Those last three lines, though, have me intrigued. Doesn't she remember anything? Great snippet!

  10. "Quick smart," is new to me. Interesting choice of words.
    Local colloquialism?
    Anyway, "Hi." has got to be one of the all time great pick-up lines!
    Nice 8!