Welcome
to another Weekend Writing Warriors. Here’s a snippet from LICK, my NA out 1st
July, now up for pre-order on Amazon. If you’re unfamiliar with the storyline, here’s the quickie blurb….
Evelyn Thomas’s plans for celebrating her
twenty-first birthday in Vegas were big. Huge. But she sure as hell never meant
to wake up on the bathroom floor with a hang-over to rival the black plague, a
very attractive half-naked tattooed man beside her, and a diamond on her finger
large enough to scare King Kong. Now if she could just remember how it all
happened.
Now,
let it be noted, I have broken the 8 sentences rule because some of these
sentences are teeny tiny. Normally I don’t let that throw me into some sort of wild west
chaotic state of mind where sentence count no longer matters and anarchy rules.
But this brief bit doesn’t work any shorter. (To the powers that be, apologies.) Here is David, our hero, facing off with Mal, the drummer from his band, over
the situation regarding his impromptu Vegas wedding. Enjoy.
“I feel
your manpain, bro. Really, I do. I mean, all you wanted was a girl that wouldn’t
kiss your ass for once and now you’re pissed at her for the same damn reason.
It’s complicated, right?”
“Fuck you.
Leave it alone, Mal. It’s done.” My husband huffed out a breath. “Anyway, she’s
the one who wanted the fucking divorce. Why aren’t you giving her the third
degree, huh?”
With a
dramatic sigh, Mal flung out his arms. “Because she’s really busy hiding around
the corner, listening. I can’t disturb her now.”
Okay, yeah, I have a weakness for rock & rollers. My ex-husband was one... lead singer/lead guitar, motorcycle riding, leather jacketed bad boy. Just don't tell my wood-chopping cowboy/military man that I'm not over the rocker bad boy thing, okay? It'll be our little secret...
ReplyDeleteI pre-ordered LICK and can't wait for it.
You had me at the quicki blurb but the additional conversation pushed me over the edge. Pre-ordered! Can't wait until July!
ReplyDeleteOh I really want to see what will happen next if she enters the conversation.
ReplyDeleteLOL. Oops. She's been caught.
ReplyDeleteLOL. That was really good! Great snippet. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI like the humor! Terrific snippet, can't wait to see the next development...
ReplyDeleteLOL "manpain" I love that he knows she's eavesdropping. Great snippet, Kylie!
ReplyDeleteUh oh. Caught. Maybe she'll join the conversation?
ReplyDeleteFabulous dialogue! Love it! Looking forward to July 1st...
ReplyDeleteHa! Great :)
ReplyDeleteLove your description--and Mal's awesome level of snark. The best stories make you laugh a little, and this snippet did that handily.
ReplyDeleteLove the lingo, bro. :) funny snippet. Love where this story is going.
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