Say, I have a
heroine. Nice girl, average everything. She could be a neighbour or someone we
went to school with or whatever. Let’s call her Polly. Now poor Polly is
kidnapped by three hot alpha armed men whose shirts have a sad habit of being
torn from their hard bodies thus displaying their lightly oiled pecs and eight
pack to any passers by. What should Polly do?
You wouldn't like Polly when she's angry. |
1. Using her
mind powers Polly summons her spirit dragon to flambé their smexy evil hides to
ash. Polly’s dragon then shape changes back into his usual football quarterback
body and they bonk.
2. Having picked
her hand-cuffs with a cunningly concealed tool kit, Polly slips her short sword
out of its usual hiding place (don’t ask) and lops off their heads. She then
sprints the 15 miles back into town and after giving a thorough report to the
local Sherriff she bends him over his desk and HOLY HELL, POLLY.
3. Whee! Group sex!!!
3. Whee! Group sex!!!
4. Polly freaks
the fuck out and doesn’t know what to do.
Sad fact is the
bulk of us would be in basket four. I was away the day of school that the FBI
came to do a quick basic training course. Bugger. Also, I have no mind powers,
evil or otherwise. A constant disappointment to me. So I just lie to my kids
about it and hope that one day soon they’ll magically appear thus making all of
my bullshit prescient. Win! But deep down, deep deep down where it really
counts. No not that deep. HEY, MY EYES ARE UP HERE, LADY. I’m holding out for a
heroine that speaks to me. Someone who can escape from two mad kidnappers,
whilst making the third fall helplessly in love with her necessitating some
fast and fun pants free action down the back of the log cabin secreted away in
the woods. Alrighty then, I don’t want someone totally every day ordinary. I
want a girl with some sass. I want a woman that won’t say die. But how much
fantasy and how much real life should we let slip onto our pages? Do we need to
be able to totally relate to our heroine to be able to cheer her on?
Here’s the thing,
it’s going to come down to individual tastes. I like a normal girl rising to
the challenge. I like the Sarah Connors of the world who don’t know what the
fuck is going on but smash that vile terminator before driving off into the
sunset in a really cool looking beat up Jeep to go give birth on their own in
the desert at the end of the film. They evolve. It’s interesting
that even Alice from Resident Evil had all of the moves, but they began the
film with her having amnesia so she could be allowed to grow into them. Was it
easier for us to empathise with her because she started out much as we would? What
value can we put upon that what the fuck?!
moment? Is it easier for us to walk a while in their shoes if they too are spun out by the shit that has just gone down?
Now, I can hear
you. It’s those mind powers of mine. Man, they are cool. Where am I going with
this? Good question. Let me explain, my love. You see, I wrote Skin with the
girl next door in mind. She cannot read minds. She does not know she has been
tossed head first into the forced seduction trope. Her hero behaves dubiously,
buying her with a van full of canned food, and she judges him accordingly. Her
hero chains her to the bed, and she does not like him for it. The snark flies. She
fucks up. (Mild spoiler alert) When an opportunity to escape is presented, she
takes it. Bad shit happens. Turns out she should have stayed put. But like any
normal person, when presented with an opportunity to get away from the maybe
madman that’s been keeping you chained to the bed ... see where I’m going with
this?
When writing
Skin, I fully expected to have to defend Nick. He can indeed be a bit of prick.
Having to defend Ros, however, never really crossed my mind. But you live and you learn. Turns
out for every reader that enjoyed the realism of Ros’s reactions, there was
another who wanted her to shut up and get to it, girl. This is a forced
seduction story after all. Did she not get that memo? Damn it! Fire the
secretary. Again.
Anyhoo, if you
like you can read it and judge for yourself. In conclusion, I like all sorts of
heroines. Big, buff, busty ones right through to the meeker, milder ones ...
actually that’s a lie. Meek bores the shit out of me. I prefer snark any day. See, individual tastes.But for what it's worth, your designated heroine for book three, Bone, will be a different creature. Not undead. Just, you know, a bit gung-ho from the get go. It's fun to spice things up and explore different characters. Sorry, it won't be out till late this year.
Kylie, I think readers need to remember when they pick up a book like SKIN they have to view the story from the within the context of the setting the author has described.
ReplyDeleteWe can't thrust upon the characters our views/perceptions/expectations of the present day/real life as those aren't valid in the world you've portrayed.
And this is what I love about your series - within the context of the world you've created, your heroines/heroes react and interact accordingly.
I may not like or agree with some of the things they do, I can be as frustrated by Ros or Alli (or any of the blokes) as I like BUT their reactions/responses are logical and reasonable because of the world they live in.
And those who get that, the richer their reading experience!
(I'm still looking for my own Finn & Daniel...when's that post-apocalyptic event going to occur?!?!?!) ;-)
Hey Alpha Kylie, thanks for commenting. It's a funny thing, reader expectation vs the writers world. At the end of the day we need to deliver a story that speaks to the audience, but if we weren't passionate about the story and its integrity and exactly how it develops, we wouldn't have had the interest in writing it in the first place. I swear I've got your Finn and Daniel on order I don't know what is wrong with Australia Post these days...
DeleteOoooooh, I can't wait for Bone, I love me a story with some double X chromosome ass-kickin' action! Bring on the ass-kicking...
ReplyDeleteI found Ros's reaction realistic. What self-respecting woman thinks 'buying' women is okay? In RL, I think men that buy women (via the sex slave trade) are the scum of the earth. Hence, while Ros is convinced that Nick bought her for you know what, how could she possibly 'go for it'? Girl's gotta have her pride...
Hey Rhyll, cheers for stopping by mate. Yeah, I think a touch of realism doesn't hurt. And a girl should have her pride. You're very right there.
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