Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. I tried my hand at
writing an Erotic Romance/Comedy at my husband's behest. No, not one single gory, gooey zombie makes
an appearance. Sad, isn’t it? Basically, it’s Cinderella if she’d left her bra behind instead of a
glass slipper. And if Cinderella was a modern day plus-size pin-up girl on a
mission to get her life in order. Its novella length and I’m polishing it up
for submission. Let me know what you think.
The sun was shining and birds were singing. And maybe, just maybe, if
Alex pressed his face hard enough into the pillow, he’d be able to suffocate
himself and put an end to the pounding inside his head. It was worth a try.
Such a pity, because the rest
of him felt fan-fucking-tastic, oddly enough. But sweet merciful mother did his
brain hurt. It easily drowned out all the bliss and happy emanating from the
neck down.
I can identify...lol. It sounds great so far :)
ReplyDeleteI'm smiling already Kylie. Sounds like its going to be fun & fab.
ReplyDeleteLOL Great job!
ReplyDeleteAh, the price we have to pay for wonderful memories. :)
ReplyDeleteNice Six!
ReplyDeleteGreat six. I could feel his hurt.
ReplyDeleteSorry he has such a headache but the description made me smile - really a fun six (hope he takes some aspirin tho LOL)!
ReplyDeleteFun 6! Sounds like he had a night of carousing and sexing!
ReplyDeleteAs much as I love your zombies, I think you'll do great with erotic romance/comedy!
ReplyDeleteGreat six - made me smile! :) Love the contrasts!
ReplyDeleteGreat 6 - The whole premise sounds great, but I love the way you've described how he feels.
ReplyDeleteI love it! You asked what we think and that's what I think :-) Your take in his POV is fabulous.
ReplyDeleteLove! :)
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