Welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. There was a lot of concern regarding the one sided kiss last week so I thought we'd continue with that. See if we can't find out why Natalie isn't getting with the program already and kissing the poor boy senseless. This is, afterall, a romance. Silly heroine. I swear... characters can be so difficult sometimes.
Angus
opened his eyes to find hers were huge, shocked. Oh, no, had he read her wrong?
His dick was killing him, fucking with his head, maybe she hadn’t meant what
he’d thought she’d meant. “Is this okay?”
“You
want...” Her lips grazed his as she spoke because he wasn’t moving back, not
until she said to.
Is Angus waiting for her to call all the shots? I have a feeling he'll get more assertive as the night closes in. Good six!
ReplyDeleteSeems like she knows what he wants - so what's she playing at?
ReplyDeleteInteresting six....hope you follow it up next week where you left off :)
ReplyDeleteWeeeell, she's not pulling away so I guess... :-P
ReplyDeleteI love that he isn't moving back! Hmmm... I wonder why she is shocked.
ReplyDeleteThis is very edgy with borderline consent issues. I hope they can sort it out between them - but maybe not too soon. If protagonists communicated effectively it would ruin a lot of good stories. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, you leave us hanging again!!! What does she say/do next? Can't wait for next week.... great description of his reaction to her non-response
ReplyDeleteLove the tension here. I definitely want to know what happens next!
ReplyDeleteNicely tense scene!
ReplyDeleteI love how he won't do anything without making sure it's her express desire. What a melty-warm hero!
ReplyDeleteGreat six :D