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Random thoughts on our impending doom and everyday life, courtesy of a Romance Writer who occasionally feels the need to talk like a Sailor.

Sunday, 22 April 2012

Six Sentence Sunday... the grovel.

Welcome back to another 6 Sentence Sunday. Today, we have a man groveling in a wee snippet from my Sci-Fi Erotic Romance nearing completion. If you mind the odd bit of crass language best be elsewhere, please. If you don't mind the occasional dash of sailor like talk, kindly read on.

Either way, an awesome Sunday to you!

(Oh, and she's not actually an intergalactic princess, it's just a term of endearment.)

 
“Princess, I fucking hate the thought of you walking away from me again. Honest to God, deep down, hate it, so... please.”
The rise and fall of her chest against his palm was furious. “You have abandonment issues now?”
“So it would seem. I’m sorry for that too, if it helps.”


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  1. Unknown22 April 2012 at 13:41

    I like it all! Great dialogue, looking forward to reading more.

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    1. Anonymous22 April 2012 at 17:05

      Awesome, Alix. Thanks for stopping by and becoming a follower!

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  2. Elin Gregory23 April 2012 at 01:43

    There's nothing like a good grovel. :) Nice six.

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 08:06

      To grovel is godly, it's true. Sorta. Thanks, Elin.

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  3. Angela Quarles23 April 2012 at 01:50

    Oh, great dialogue!! He sounds so very male and I love her comeback...

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 08:06

      Hey Ms Angela, glad you like it!

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  4. Silver James23 April 2012 at 03:56

    I agree with Angela. He does sound very male! And who doesn't love a good grovel. ;) And wow, your heroine really got to the heart of the matter! Nice snippet.

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 08:07

      Hi Silver, good to see you back again. Popping over to yours right about now! Yeah, I do like my Alpha's on there knee's occasionally.

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  5. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 05:45

    I love their exchange--Great six!

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 08:08

      Thanks, Trinity. Delighted you liked it!

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  6. L.J. Kentowski23 April 2012 at 06:15

    Love this 6! Short and to the point dialogue with tons of emotion in it! Can't wait to read more!

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    1. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 08:12

      Hi L.J., thank you very much for stopping by and giving me your feedback. It really helps!

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  7. E. Jamie26 April 2012 at 09:39

    Very intriguing six!

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  8. Anonymous26 April 2012 at 13:18

    Thank you!

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